Daniel sent me three photos to look at with the intent of choosing the strongest image. As always, I like my fellow photographers to read what was written to me since so many people share the same questions or experiences. Here’s what Daniel had to say:
“Hey Joe,
Once again, just looking for a good critique. this pictures were taken at the rooftop of the hotel I work for. Lately I’ve been trying to make photographs that tell a little more than “uh, look at that”.
I’m not quite sure if this pictures tell much, I’m sure I would have to explain what the objects on the left are, and why the person is tied up, if the viewer is even able to tell. I guess my main concern is whether this pictures have any visual tension. i tried to create a bit of a pull by having his body kind of go with the buildings from big to small. Same thing with the objects on the left. Out of these three which one would you say works best?
Thanks for time,
Daniel”
Daniel, I’ve started created video critiques the same way I do in my online class with the PPSOP, so I’ve positioned all three of your photos side by side so a more comprehensive comparison can be made. Creating Visual Tension is an important part of my “Stretching Your Frame of Mind” class and workshop, and is an important element that’s found on my Artist Palette.
Take a look at the video: www.screencast.com/t/PYywbYOIeelW”
Thanks for the submission, and BTW, I like where you placed the man. The negative space that surrounds him clearly defines him and by minimizing that negative space between him and the buildings also generates Visual Tension.
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