I’m quite happy about it, but nevertheless have some doubts about the light and the composition. It’s edited in Lightroom. I increased the clarity a bit and lightened the shadows. It now looks pretty much as I saw it.
But how does it work? Is it too dark? Is it too light? What about the balance between the amount of sky and water? And the composition? I had to be quick, because the boat went rather fast.
Instead of the usual critique I type out, for the first time I’m going to send you a video critique. This is what I do in my online class with the PPSOP. The things I’ll cover in this critique I also cover in my “Stretching Your Frame of Mind” workshops I conduct around the planet.
Take a look at my critique by clicking on this link: http://www.screencast.com/t/04nKGurJFFt
Visit my website at: www.joebaraban.com and watch for my 2014 workshop schedule at the top of this blog. Come shoot with me sometime.
Don’t forget to send me a photo and question to: AskJoeB@gmail.com.